favorite scene!!!!hmmmmm

my favorite part in the novel so far has to be where sean is explaing to michael what the poem is about. the reason i like this chapter is because of that poem its basically explaining how they went into battle knowing that they were gonna die and still went foreword the reason that the soilders went foreword was that they did not question their leader even if meant to the death it was also showing honor that they were ready to die for they beileved in its a really good poem

Life and stress

I'm choosing to write about life because sometimes life can be stress full for example I am usually always tired with school and work and church but I always seem to push myself everyday and keep moving forward just knowing that I'm grateful to god for what he has done in my life and continue to bless me with everything god has given me because alot of people would want to go to school and there's alot of people who really need a job and I'm glad that I have both things I am grateful for everythig I have.. Even though sometimes I may feel as if I wanna stop because stress gets to me but I keep moving forward in life because in the end it really pays off

hmmmm what do i think?well let me tell you

well i do agree with what i learned in high school i did learn alot and it did prepare me, i dont believe that it was the educational system that made some mistake well they might have made some mistakes but not big ones because in the end it all counts on what the students is doing. for example, in high school i was a good student but there were days where id fall asleep or days where i did  not pay attention. for the most part i really do feel that the schools did there job to prepare us for college, yes they could have done a better job but for the most part they did a good job.however, like i said in class before i had a really good SAT score as well as a good HSA score, but i was mislead by the representatives of MC as well as the councilor at MC and they need to really work on customer service like a.s.a.p because they always have an attitude all the time and they never want to help they help because it is there job to help but they really need to work on that and stop shimeshucking people. one more thing that was so misleading that they said that if you had a high score that you did not need to take the placement test but either way you still end up taking the test and the things that were on the test i have not learned any of that yet on the test there was no essay assignment so what i thought is that yes i knew that i was going to learn grammar which is good because i did learn grammar but what about the other stuff that were on the test.???? so i thought oh maybe you learned it in a reading class and i did some investagation and it turns out that theres only a little subject about it so basically what was on the placement test is not being taught in the classes i also looked at my friends paper who is in en 101and i couldnt help to say that my paper was better then his but he didnt get graded as hard as i did, so what im saying is that if theres gonna be a placement test let the test be about grammar and on how to write a structure out line as well as a structure essay. even if they had made the test like that about a coulpe months ago then yes i would be happy in the class that im in as well as the the stuff im learning, but i think if someone who is supposably taking a higher class then me but if my paper is looking a lot better then they have to take en 001 as well as en 002 if were gonna be fair. and i guess community colleges do this not to waist students time but they have to pay there bills some how if you catch my drift.

Ace

A process that has worked for me in the past is very simple process. What has worked for me is to first get used to the teacher you have that way I know what she is expecting and learned how she grades. So it's better to know what the teacher is expecting from me and to always read all the directions that she has left that way I know what to do and not mess up on the assignment

A fresh start

What surprised me in EN 002 was the book that we are reading the blind side because basically everyone knows about the movie and a lot of people Like football so I didn't expect to read a book about football I was expecting to read another boring book that puts people to sleep Like another book about how bad the food industry is but can't wait to finish reading the book and hopefully we get to watch the movie in class

i have one left in me

well im a sports guy and im still happy about what had happen on sunday when the steelers took the division from the ravens it was the best game of the week i felt that some fouls should have been called aganist the ravens but its alright since we beat them in there home field and we take the divison from them in other news the game that was really good would have to  be the patriots and the jets two great teams and the W went to tom brady and the patriots

Looking back

Hmmmm looking back at how this year of how college started in en001 I can proudly say that yes I have learned alot more then I did coming into this class I improved on ally writing skills since I started my essay come out alot better then it did before there are still some areas for improvement but in time I know I can do better.one thing that I would inform. Someone who is taking this class would to not take it to lightly and to take it as if it were any other class